This is phenomenal. Seriously, the intro drew me in immediately. And that low synth, oh man i love that. It's really dramatic (which i LOVE). And the sounds you used were perfect for it. I love where the melody comes in with the phaser behind it, that sounds awesome. And the break after that is superb. You played this out extremely well. Everything sounds like it's exactly where it should be. It actually gave me goosebumps in the beginning. I'm not going to be able to stop listening to this. Keep writing like this!! I love it!